No one will save me

No one will save me

518 Reads 23 Votes 3 Part Story
DONGeee By DONGeee Completed

a series of poems that express my emotions.

Antharimar Antharimar Sep 11, 2011
THis is an amazing poem.
                              I love every word of it
                              'Help me, god.
                              help me please.'
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Apr 30, 2011
@CompassWolf123 Cheers! And just realised I didn't vote so VTD!
Antharimar Antharimar Apr 30, 2011
I agree wiht @Warrior_Prophet's points.
                              This is amazing work.
                              Your poems allways keep the rythm, but at the same time they don't miss out on realism or tone.
                              LOVE IT!
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Jan 31, 2011
Flowed great and nicely titled! Plenty of strong depthed lines in there as well... You should have a go at the 'Poets Duets'... Check it out on my profile and let me know! You'll make an awesome addition...