Rejected by my Alpha Enemy ( Slow Editing )

Rejected by my Alpha Enemy ( Slow Editing )

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Danny By Skai_Ryd3r Updated Dec 17, 2016

But I wanted more out of him, I wanted him moaning my name in pleasure. So I'll do whatever it took to get what I wanted. Then I whispered in his ear " You know it ain't nice not to moan, so will you moan for me?" I said sounding so innocent but seductive at the same time. His face was full of pleasure and arousal. I am doing a fucking awesome job! I have just accomplished one of my goals. I go back down to the mark and start sucking on it, to see if he'll moan. When he did it made me shudder. Gosh I was getting off track! Focus, Liyah Focus! One of my hands travel down to his abs, surprising him as I pushed my hand into his jeans.

              He gasped like I did something wrong, which I didn't. I grabbed hold of him and started stroking him slowly. When I bite his neck he moaned so loud I thought I went death. But it was so cute to see him panting and moaning. I stopped and pulled myself off him. I got my hand out of his jeans and got off the bed, achieving my goal. He looked so confused when I stopped stroking him. Before I could leave, he grabbed me by the waist and pulled me back onto the bed. " I want you to finish me" he growled in a deep husky voice
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(A/N: This a part from the story! Do note this later on in the story, and I will be editing this story. Hope ya enjoy ;P )

Rayne_Storm Rayne_Storm Feb 17, 2015
It OBVIOUSLY says SLOWLY editing so there isn't a need to use disgusting language, she will correct the spelling when she can...
ElleysNotReallyHere ElleysNotReallyHere Mar 02, 2014
I love this name, would you mind if I used this name for the new story I'm writing. : D
Skai_Ryd3r Skai_Ryd3r May 19, 2012
@mgwescoat  thane for the good criticism. Sorry it took me so long to relpy but I will try and proof read before hand!!!!!!
imissubear imissubear Mar 19, 2012
So far this sound like the typical cliche story but im keeping my fingers crossed that it isnt since yur description nibbled a little on my curiosity...So here i am :P So far nothings different but we'll see... ;)
Skai_Ryd3r Skai_Ryd3r Mar 16, 2012
Um i dont know i just wanted to kinda add a twist to it. But thanx for commenting really needed it!!!!!!!!!!