American Dream?

American Dream?

8.4K Reads 227 Votes 32 Part Story
Ashley By Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Completed

Alexandra Stevens has a distinctly average life. Everyday going through the same loop of events. Her mum and sister Serena seem to be in a constant agrument and her perfect best friend remains to be the star of the show. But when her mum gets a job offer in New York, USA, she doesn't know whether to stay behind in England or leave everything she loves behind. 
Based on a true story.

  • alexandra
  • america
  • highschool
  • jason
  • love
  • new
  • sister
  • unpopular
  • usa
  • york
Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Mar 16, 2012
@JC_Ninja Thanks so much for the advice! I really appreciate it XD
carelessbunny carelessbunny Mar 15, 2012
Hmm...it would b better if u do not capitalize ur words...italicization is enough.   A little more details would help u deal with ur length issues. But it was nice read nonetheless! 
                              Good luck x
_killerqueen_ _killerqueen_ Mar 13, 2012
It's short but easy to read. It flowed well. I'm heading to the next chapter right now! Good start.
Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Mar 13, 2012
I am so thankful for your advise!!!!! Keep reading (if you want)!!!!!
Friday13thx3 Friday13thx3 Mar 13, 2012
I like this story, the beginning drew the reader in and its relatable. there are small grammar mistakes but its an easy fix, you have good descriptions and good characters keep posting! =)
Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Mar 13, 2012
Thanks!!!! It's not finished yet though, gald you liked it!!!!!!! :D