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Cowboy's regret

Cowboy's regret

522K Reads 18.9K Votes 25 Part Story
baba5baba By baba5baba Completed

He was too rich and too powerful to consider a girl like Olivia for anything more than a fling. Olivia might be as poor as a church mouse, but she was intelligent. Just the thought of matrimony sent shivers down their spine, they were confirmed bachelors. You don't mention the word "marriage" in front of Jade brothers without getting the dangerous looks.

pulis57 pulis57 Apr 13
Olivia and Austin? What other brothers who was married to a veggie farmer ?
This was a very capturing start...Wanting to go further down the lane...And if possible, all the way to the end of it!
Lucky_240 Lucky_240 Jun 03, 2014
good start with enough background info. but felt like you jumps to next sections so quickly and ending of section that start to say about olivia i think if it will better if you make it like they started to stay at the house and doing repairs. add some dialogs they are the icing to  your cake :D
MCStudios MCStudios May 31, 2014
awesome story, the characters seem so alive. check out my western
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 May 24, 2014
This intrigues me! Olivia is surely a southern bell, isn't she?
blondieblu blondieblu Mar 30, 2014
They had almost no visibility.The nearby hills that he knew were there,were not visible.