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Cowboy's regret

Cowboy's regret

504K Reads 18.1K Votes 25 Part Story
baba5baba By baba5baba Completed

He was too rich and too powerful to consider a girl like Olivia for anything more than a fling. Olivia might be as poor as a church mouse, but she was intelligent. Just the thought of matrimony sent shivers down their spine, they were confirmed bachelors. You don't mention the word "marriage" in front of Jade brothers without getting the dangerous looks.

So said each of them...One of the other brothers can provide the grandchildren...Si I can have my fun...
This was a very capturing start...Wanting to go further down the lane...And if possible, all the way to the end of it!
Purrypurr Purrypurr Apr 21, 2016
Honestly, the story is good. Though it kinda bores me. But i'm still staying til the end though. :)
Lucky_240 Lucky_240 Jun 03, 2014
good start with enough background info. but felt like you jumps to next sections so quickly and ending of section that start to say about olivia i think if it will better if you make it like they started to stay at the house and doing repairs. add some dialogs they are the icing to  your cake :D
MCStudios MCStudios May 31, 2014
awesome story, the characters seem so alive. check out my western
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 May 24, 2014
This intrigues me! Olivia is surely a southern bell, isn't she?