The Legend of the white Dragon

The Legend of the white Dragon

3.2K Reads 60 Votes 14 Part Story
Dave Akulis By Sodenoshirayuki Updated Sep 06, 2013

Akulis is a not so ordinary teenager who finds out he is part of a long line of guardians who protect the magical elemental orbs. trouble starts when an adversary wants to use the magical orbs to resurrect the all powerful white dragon. along the way Akulis meets some friends and family who help him step up and stand up against the ever looming evil

  • action
  • adventure
  • college
  • fantasy
  • fighting
Sodenoshirayuki Sodenoshirayuki Feb 14, 2013
Maybe it's because I find it a little hard to advertise my story. And that's why I have so little reads. But I'm trying a lot harder to get my book out there.@DJEsvilm08
Rmsha21 Rmsha21 Apr 26, 2012
It was really short, and looked incomplete, anyways, I'll move on to the next chap :)
Rmsha21 Rmsha21 Apr 26, 2012
Interesting prologue! I like your writing style but you'd have to proofread once because there are some spelling mistakes!
                              Other than that, I like the plot of you story! :))
Sodenoshirayuki Sodenoshirayuki Mar 26, 2012
thanx for reading really means a lot. oh I know the dialogue is pretty confusing in the beginning but I fixed it up as the chapters go on. I'm thinking of re doing chapter 1 through 4. those chapters need major dialogue fixing
NadiaHambali NadiaHambali Mar 24, 2012
Well, this is kinda short. Try making a longer chapter, kay?
Sodenoshirayuki Sodenoshirayuki Mar 15, 2012
I actually have someone working on a cover for me. as soon as she's done. I will post it