conflicting sides of a broken heart
Loved this. Loved the pacing of it and it's so well written. Also, loved the repetition of 'half of my heart' and then its switch to 'all of my heart'. Outstanding work filled with incredible emotion.
This is so very true for my sister. She did some pretty bad stuff and while I still love her, my heart plays that tug-o-war game all the time. Very nice. I voted :)
"But half of my heart yearns to forget
What the other half knew."
I loooove these lines. Very emotional. Very sentimental. Voted!
This was definitely amazing, I really enjoyed reading it :) Definitely keep writing poetry and keep up the great work!! :D voted :)
I really love this poem, the expression and the feeling is really beautiful. I've seen many poems try to express what you have done, but this is the best. Great job. Voted.
I dunno really what to say cause this is awesome...at first i had a little bit of difficulties finding the right rhythm to read it but that's probably cos english ain't my native language. But yea in the end I really liked the poem, you're talented and know how to play with words!