All of my heart *Poem*

All of my heart *Poem*

333 Reads 36 Votes 1 Part Story
simmcha1 By simmcha1 Completed

conflicting sides of a broken heart

  • broken
  • forget
  • forgive
  • heart
  • truth
Megabucks Megabucks Oct 03, 2012
Loved this.  Loved the pacing of it and it's so well written.  Also, loved the repetition of 'half of my heart' and then its switch to 'all of my heart'.  Outstanding work filled with incredible emotion.
megra9511 megra9511 Aug 13, 2012
This is so very true for my sister. She did some pretty bad stuff and while I still love her, my heart plays that tug-o-war game all the time. Very nice. I voted :)
angeldrb angeldrb Aug 02, 2012
"But half of my heart yearns to forget
                              What the other half knew."
                              
                              I loooove these lines. Very emotional. Very sentimental. Voted!
MysticAurora1 MysticAurora1 Aug 01, 2012
This was definitely amazing, I really enjoyed reading it :) Definitely keep writing poetry and keep up the great work!! :D voted :)
SeeChanWrite SeeChanWrite Jul 31, 2012
I really love this poem, the expression and the feeling is really beautiful. I've seen many poems try to express what you have done, but this is the best. Great job. Voted.
milliei milliei Jul 31, 2012
I dunno really what to say cause this is awesome...at first i had a little bit of difficulties finding the right rhythm to read it but that's probably cos english ain't my native language. But yea in the end I really liked the poem, you're talented and know how to play with words!