What Makes You Beautiful (A Sporty Love Story)

What Makes You Beautiful (A Sporty Love Story)

16.1K Reads 142 Votes 20 Part Story
ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM By ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM Updated Apr 17, 2013

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A story of a girl, a sporty kind of girl who never ever had a boyfriend since the start of her existence. After years of waiting, no, she's actually not waiting but she started to fancy some guy in their school but she's playing hard to get.
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The story is based by the song, "What Makes You Beautiful by One Direction" Hope you like it.

AN ENTRY TO WATTY AWARDS 2012

Published: March 11, 2012

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  • horan
  • niall
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  • onedirection
  • soccer
overcompensatinglady overcompensatinglady Apr 27, 2012
I like your way of writing :) I agree with the last comment, it is original. I thought you were going to use the real 1D, but no. A great start! :)
pepsipaw pepsipaw Apr 27, 2012
I havent read but I like how u have the words of What makes you beautiful in the chapters. Can't wait to get into it!
ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM Apr 26, 2012
@StephyBoo yeah, well, i obviously need some editor cause I am not that good at righting grammatical errors ... do you think you can help me?
StephyBoo StephyBoo Apr 26, 2012
So there were some obvious errors that need fixing but it was interesting. I liked it but felt that you could introduce your character a little better. Other then that it was good.
polkaLALA728 polkaLALA728 Apr 25, 2012
@ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM There are a lot of people who are great in grammar here on wattpad. Just make a few friends and ask them for help. ^^
ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM ZAYNIARRYLOUIAM Apr 25, 2012
@polkaLALA728 cool!!! but yeah..the errs are pretty much there and obviously, I need a great editor cause im not that good at righting grammar errs... :)