Strange Haunting (On Hold)

Strange Haunting (On Hold)

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Heather Federow By xxxheathermariexxx Updated Mar 06, 2011

Kayla is a girl who sees more then just the regular everyday stuff. She sees ghosts. But she doesn't know that. Her parents move her across the country. Will she survive staying in a haunted house? read to find out!

BelleBurns BelleBurns Feb 24, 2011
It's a good start but you also need to be catchy if you're writing a thriller story.... Anyway the plot was good... *Voted* =) 
tianajade tianajade Feb 24, 2011
An alright start (: Some more detail would be good to add. It's also a little fast paced. It sounds like an interesting storyline, though. Keep writing! :)
River123 River123 Feb 11, 2011
I think you need 2 put stars in or something when you skip forward cause otherwise it's a bit confusing xx
                              But other than that ( and too much formal Language) it's genius xxxx