If you could see me right now...

If you could see me right now...

1.5K Reads 32 Votes 9 Part Story
Megan O'Connor By _HyperGirl_ Updated May 04, 2013

This story is about two teenage girls.  They both fancy this gorgeous guy. But little do they know he fancy's both of them. When one of the girls moves away, will they be able to remain best-friends forever? Will long distance relationships work? You never know.
I need some comments so I can improve this story for your enjoyment.

_HyperGirl_ _HyperGirl_ Jun 23, 2013
@FlyingTooHigh Thanks :) I'v been trying really hard and doing loads of background research. Hope people like it :) x
FlyingTooHigh FlyingTooHigh Jun 23, 2013
its shit :') .. ahh no its great :') more detailed then v1, good job on re writing it, keep it up (: <3 x
_HyperGirl_ _HyperGirl_ Jul 19, 2011
@ReadinggGeekk Thank u soo much That comment totally make my day. :) :D I just assume im not good when i have barely any fans or comments or votes. Thanks for taking time to read it! Means alot!! :) ;) xxx
                              Love Megz xxx
_HyperGirl_ _HyperGirl_ Jul 18, 2011
@faberoony_98 Thanks (: haha okay  will in the next few chapter there is twists this chapter was a filler 1 (: had to put it in xxx
NatSlight NatSlight May 28, 2011
@_HyperGirl_ Lovely friendship you have developed here. It's sad about Madison leaving. Just one piece of advice, try breaking your text up into smaller paragraphs. The way it is now, is a little difficult to read. Otherwise, great start to your story.
1D_Infection_ 1D_Infection_ May 01, 2011
:( maddie is leaving :( hmmm I wonder who the boy is...great story! I like it:)