Model Perfection

Model Perfection

2.4K Reads 40 Votes 5 Part Story
Chace By ModelChick95 Updated Oct 28, 2013

Claire Telmar is just an average seventeen year old girl. She's smart, athletic, and very sarcastic. Her sister Macie is the youngest up and arising model at only fifteen, and although modeling is Macie's life, Chace has never seen the real draw to it. When Macie gets the chance to attend a super prestegious top modeling school guaranteed to make you or break you, she is more than exstatic. Things take a turn for the worse though when Macie all of a sudden comes down with pnemonia and can no longer attend. Thats when her identical looking sister Chace decides to take matters into her own hands and goes in Macie's place, anyways, how hard can modeling really be?

  • bikini
  • claire
  • dad
  • hospital
  • macie
  • model
  • modeling
  • mom
  • perfection
  • pneumonia
  • school
  • sick
  • vice
dansbairro dansbairro Dec 09, 2012
can you please vote and read this story....and if possible comment and give advice,thanks so much  http://www.wattpad.com/story/3226085-is-there-really-a-me-%26-you
M1sch3v1ous2Cheerful M1sch3v1ous2Cheerful Dec 04, 2012
more detail, but a great story, read min you'll love it... newgirl new witch
ModelChick95 ModelChick95 Apr 05, 2012
@Jilleigh Thanks a bunch!!! :)
                              @ClaudineVV Thanks so much for the help.!!
                              @MindOfAImageBoy Awesome!! I like that your starting to get where I'm going with it!!!
                              @RunForYourLife Awwww thanks!!!! Your awesome!! :)
ThurstonHearts ThurstonHearts Mar 29, 2012
Very much liked! I suggest more insight into detail and looking back at your sentences to better format them into the text, but otherwise this was good. I liked the dialouge you provided too, it was rich and flowed nic einto the story! keep up the good work!!!!!
Jilleigh Jilleigh Mar 29, 2012
Modeling is a hard industry and I'm curious as to how this will affect Mace and the protagonist, the sister. This was nicely paced and the dialogue was smooth. Great chapter.