Leaving Me

Leaving Me

134 Reads 3 Votes 1 Part Story
kel By wishfullthinkiing Updated Mar 10, 2012

Sydnee and Demi were inseparable – as in they did everything together: sports, vacations, you name it. They were like sisters separated at birth until one day, an unexpected death involving Demi and a rare case of cancer changed Sydnee’s life for the worse. Neighbors, counselors, and classmates try to comfort Sydnee by telling her that "it gets better", but not even a magician could bring Demi back, nevermind a useless piece of advice of the future. Follow Sydney through her tough times as new disasters spring into her life, destroying every last sense of hope she ever thought she had.

PrettyBrokenKilljoy PrettyBrokenKilljoy Aug 10, 2013
Aw, this was quite sad. I liked the concept, though it is a little cliche. It was well written, I only noticed some minor mistakes, but would probably read better if you separated your paragraphs. It seems like a really swet story though and your characters personality shows through your writing :)