What I Think Life Is.....

What I Think Life Is.....

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Bae By snowxflake Updated Jan 05, 2016

A series of short poems, each a short story. Each poem based on different person's life. Who knows, maybe you are one of them.




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infinitywordlover infinitywordlover Oct 05, 2014
Woah this is unique. This is the first poetry I have read on wattpad and...WOW. One thing I love about poetry is they're short so they don't take much time to read, but at the same time have the potential to spark as many thoughts as the longest story. You do a great job doing this!
Dreamer_Psych0 Dreamer_Psych0 Sep 10, 2014
I'm a huge fan of poetry and this was overall a nice read. But I think you should try combining some of your stanzas, to cut down on the choppiness.
FuzzyLittleMunchkin FuzzyLittleMunchkin Sep 09, 2014
Hey! This aint bad, but i don't know, aren't poems supposed to rhyme? (i'm not really into poetry so...)
outofthisatmosphere outofthisatmosphere Sep 03, 2014
This is a good! I agree with the comment below, as I thought that the reading was odd with the different line breaks. Just one spelling mistake (keep instead of keep). Overall, a nice poem!
SeekingSolace SeekingSolace Sep 02, 2014
Critique: This is very good, but I would suggest you combine some of your stanzas, it reads a bit choppy.
ScarletFire ScarletFire Jul 27, 2012
Love the poem overall but  it's more whole life than daily life, don't you think? Otherwise, it's great! :)