Mr Alpha, you'll have to do better than that !!

Mr Alpha, you'll have to do better than that !!

794K Reads 7.7K Votes 29 Part Story
Rebecca By bexz9966 Completed

Rebecca lives with her older two twins brothers in the pack house, after her parents recent death she has became alpha, life was starting to sort its self out and then a new pack moves into town and thier sexy aplha trys to win her heart

iforgot1 iforgot1 May 10, 2016
Wasn't she just like getting out of bed and eating her "breakfast" then went upstairs and then you know what I will take it
ChiomaChillax ChiomaChillax May 14, 2014
First of all, u said younger brothers later thee became older,i don't get It???????
Lol2254 Lol2254 Jul 09, 2013
Thank God... A writer that checks over for spelling errors. Good book so far.
Bubblybubblegirl Bubblybubblegirl Jan 08, 2013
I like the idea so far, but third person is killing me!!! I love it when the character is explaining the story instead of some random stalker narrator! <3 =P
XxSilverstreamxX XxSilverstreamxX Dec 17, 2012
Please, sentences? I think one of you paragraphs was just a sentence and I found myself running out of breath
cookie725 cookie725 Aug 27, 2012
Pretty good, but lay off on the extensive details! Nobody cares if the tank top showed off her figure or how long Sharon's hair was. Stop with the listing of the details, but otherwise, good story!