How I Crashed My Best Friend's Wedding.

How I Crashed My Best Friend's Wedding.

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Neonnerd By Neonnerd Completed

Lacey Deroni finds herself falling into a classic love story, she's in love with her mega-adorkable best friend Ryan Trent. Only problem is it seems that he's fallen for her step-sister. It crushes Lacey to even begin to think that the two are engaged. She thinks everything is just black and white, but is there really something going on that could change everything? <3

SanaRafiq SanaRafiq May 07
Got bored.  one really need to search before writing something better.
jardinakate jardinakate Mar 12, 2012
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JonathanSchalembier JonathanSchalembier Mar 11, 2012
You've got a good idea going here, but your writing isn't fluid enough to keep me interested. It all blurred together for me and the use of onomatopoeia's was awkward. You should build more at the beginning, because this doesn't seem like a solid foundation to build a story on.
JewelsUniqueWriting JewelsUniqueWriting May 01, 2011
its really good :) I can really relate to this because something similar to this happened to me :) Good job I voted and fanned !
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Mar 20, 2011
Really good, just fix some grammatical errors and it'd be perfect.
XxMeepXx XxMeepXx Feb 02, 2011
I love it! I feel so bad that Ryan just doesn't know how she feels about him and I would be so upset with my sis knew how I felt about a guy, but continued to pretend as if she didn't! Continue please! :)