Let It Be

Let It Be

115 Reads 4 Votes 2 Part Story
cass By howcoulditbe Updated Mar 11, 2012

Alex is confused. She feels misunderstood and looks for comfort in sex. 
But how can she find it, with so many people out to get her? Out to get everyone?

  • cherry
  • kissed
  • toiletfloor
SavingFaces SavingFaces Dec 28, 2012
If you choose to keep going with this (i hope you do) then try to developer the characters, they sex scenes are good and you keep a reader hooked. Super good!!'
_Sweetay_ _Sweetay_ Mar 11, 2012
this seems a little rated r lol but i like it so far.. it could be longer than this though.. and try not to start all of your sentences with I did this or she did that.. say something like, "Pulling back up, we started kissing again." Start the sentence verb..