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Runners vs Walkers: The eternal battle for death

Runners vs Walkers: The eternal battle for death

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freudylove By freudylove Updated Mar 25, 2012

When Eloise makes the decision to go on the run from the Walkers, to hide from the hideous killers that injured her whole family, she risks her own life. Can she find love in the darkest of times? Even in the deepest vault in the headquarters of the Walkers, in Kiribati, Tarawa? Read and discover the story...

livAlittle livAlittle Mar 25, 2012
It was an interesting beginning to a story.  It was just a little hard to read because the paragraphs blended together.  You might want to add an extra enter between your paragraphs, just to make it easier for readers.  Other than that, nice job!