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Boxing my way into your heart

Boxing my way into your heart

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Nancy (: By XxxRosePetalsXxx Updated Mar 17, 2013

Adam Leganar always had everything hes wanted; girls, money, buddies to hang out with. everything! So hes now starting some boxing lessons to relief some stress from work. But something goes wrong his teacher is the smoking Jacqueline Garcia she is everything that Adam finds attractive in a woman; she has strong attitude, strong willed, she says what's on her mind, and wont let anybody tame her. Hes up to the challenge, but after he's never really had to chase after anything this hard. Can he really tame a beauty like her into submission to her heart? Or will she just too much to handle? And her, what does she think about all of this? 


XxxRosePetalsXxx XxxRosePetalsXxx Mar 12, 2013
@Aeolanyira Thank you! Hahaha again (: Yeahh I know I think after the story is done I will revise and edit everything so its not as bad Lol sorry about that by the way (:
XxxRosePetalsXxx XxxRosePetalsXxx Dec 13, 2012
@ChocolateAndMorphine Thanks (: Hes supossed to be mean but then he starts changing (: and thanks for commenting! (:
ChocolateAndMorphine ChocolateAndMorphine Dec 10, 2012
It was really interesting && I liked that it started with his POV. He is a little mean though, but I like it!
XxxRosePetalsXxx XxxRosePetalsXxx May 20, 2012
@MeganFoncannon hahahah yeah i know what you mean, so thats why i did it later on in the story (:
MeganFoncannon MeganFoncannon May 20, 2012
@XxxRosePetalsXxx The dialogue and paragraphing are really difficult to follow. It would be a good suggestion to space out your paragraphs (:
XxxRosePetalsXxx XxxRosePetalsXxx May 18, 2012
@MeganFoncannon What were you confused about? andd thanks! (: I appreciate it (: