Percy Goes to Hogwarts - [Percy in Hogwarts Series:Book 1] ✓

Percy Goes to Hogwarts - [Percy in Hogwarts Series:Book 1] ✓

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Percy gets a letter from Hogwarts asking him to attend the school for sixth year after his holidays.What happens when the two worlds crash? Takes place after the Giant War and Wizard war.

  • annabeth
  • camp
  • charm
  • draco
  • gods
  • granger
  • harry
  • herione
  • hermione
  • hogwarts
  • jackson
  • magic
  • malfoy
  • percy
  • potter
  • ron
  • weasley
  • weasly
  • witch
  • wizards
Comma after minutes.
                              
                              Replace comma with period.
                              
                              Comma after ‘hair.’
                              
                              And who takes 10 minute baths? That’s be more like a shower.
“Morning, Percy!” Paul, my stepfather, said, looking up from his newspaper to give me a smile.
                              
                              
                              
                              Just so you know, I’m going to correct everything I see that’s wrong.
... the comma is not supposed to be after the quotation marks.
                              
                              If a question mark, period or a exclamation mark is placed after someone speaks, there isn’t supposed to be a comma at all.
                              
                              AND WHY IS THEIR SPEECH IN ITALICS?
I ship only 2 couples so HARD AND U RUINED THEM BOTH😣😭😣😭😣😭
The exclamation marks don’t need to be there, and there only needs to be one if they are needed.
                              
                              Comma before ‘giving.’
                              
                              Replace ‘in’ with ‘on.’
                              
                              AND WHY IS THE SPEECH IN ITALICS? What’s the point? It doesn’t do anything!
“Good morning Perce,” my mom told me, giving a sweet smile.
                              
                              And since when has Sally called Percy “Perce?”
                              
                              And why the extra, and unnecessary punctuation after everything they say?