Hope Has Returned

Hope Has Returned

239K Reads 7.6K Votes 65 Part Story
PJO_HOO_HP By PJO_HOO_HP Updated Mar 15, 2014

A Hinny fanfic that takes place after the second wizarding war

The only criticism I have is that it goes quite quick and is a tad confusing. Otherwise, loved it! 😍
21Mkendall 21Mkendall Apr 22
So far it's really good but yah same scene in different POVs is sort of boring and repetitive
GOD DAMN IT THIS IS SOFAR THE BAST DAM THING IVE READ(you said to criticize so iam)
Cry_Baby_Howell Cry_Baby_Howell Jan 30, 2016
I think it's good so far, but I think you need to describe the settings and what the characters look like.
charlotteesk1 charlotteesk1 Nov 03, 2016
I like it! It would be better is you did not put the same scene in two different POV's. Nice. ;)
arandomfandomgirl arandomfandomgirl Aug 10, 2016
I love it so far, but don't put the same scene in another POV. But other than that, I think it'll be great!