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Hope Has Returned

Hope Has Returned

209K Reads 6.9K Votes 65 Part Story
PJO_HOO_HP By PJO_HOO_HP Updated Mar 15, 2014

A Hinny fanfic that takes place after the second wizarding war

GOD DAMN IT THIS IS SOFAR THE BAST DAM THING IVE READ(you said to criticize so iam)
Cry_Baby_Howell Cry_Baby_Howell Jan 30, 2016
I think it's good so far, but I think you need to describe the settings and what the characters look like.
BellaMollyChase BellaMollyChase Nov 03, 2016
I like it! It would be better is you did not put the same scene in two different POV's. Nice. ;)
arandomfandomgirl arandomfandomgirl Aug 10, 2016
I love it so far, but don't put the same scene in another POV. But other than that, I think it'll be great!
ines_thejord ines_thejord Sep 18, 2016
Don't make them think the exact same thing it's not realistic
chloconuts chloconuts Dec 11, 2015
It's good I just don't think I can read it because the povs aren't written in the same style as the actual books