Rejected by your mate, or a dead mate. Which would you say is worse?

Rejected by your mate, or a dead mate. Which would you say is worse?

1.4K Reads 23 Votes 2 Part Story
Rose By Tiger_Shy Updated Jul 22, 2012

Arella has been picked on since she was small for being the fat ugly runt of her pack, or maybe I should say tormented. She is beatten at home and at school she is bullied to no end. Her only comphort is Ademia another outcast of the pack, her mate was murdered by a rouge. And ever  since then the pack has rejected her. Finally both of them have enough and together they leave their pack and start a newer stronger pack, just like them. So will they find there are such things as second chances?

Tiger_Shy Tiger_Shy Apr 03, 2012
@BabyFace2121 thanks I am trying to upload i just don't have  allot of free time on my hands but i am trying to upload soon! :)
JBLover2121 JBLover2121 Apr 02, 2012
WRITE MORE NOW!!!!! IM HUNGRY FOR MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????? LMFAO
Tiger_Shy Tiger_Shy Mar 17, 2012
@jpipkin Thanks! I am hoping to upload ether Sunday or Monday!  :)
Tiger_Shy Tiger_Shy Mar 17, 2012
@MariEvaCruxx   Yeh grammar has never been my strong suit, and i am even worse at spelling. Which is really weird considering my dad teaches English in collage.... but thank you for  bringing my attention to it! :) and hope you keep reading! :)
MariEvaCruxx MariEvaCruxx Mar 17, 2012
I LOVE THE PLOT !!!!!! But there is always room for improvement ! Starting with minimizing errors in grammar and spelling ! Pls. dont take this the other way just wanna read a good story and youra i predict will be great after some editing ! 
                              
                              P.S. Update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!