Unexpected (OLD *UNEDITED* VERSION)

Unexpected (OLD *UNEDITED* VERSION)

58 Part Story 5.7M Reads 126K Votes
roxann By roxann_season Completed

She is the Chosen One. He is Gabriel Gavino, il prossimo Mafioso Don - 
    the next in line. Before she saves anyone they're going to save each 
    other.

___infamous___ ___infamous___ Oct 29, 2015 03:30PM
this story is amazing so far. mind giving me advice on mine?
PerfectBun PerfectBun Jun 19, 2015 12:37AM
Edited as in grammar or edited as in the details of the story ?
NeldAruin NeldAruin May 25, 2015 04:44PM
I love the story.  Thinking now how they would find the Choosen one. Why are they running and hidding? 
                                    
                                    Greetings from Colombia.
BeKaiLLE BeKaiLLE Mar 05, 2015 01:41PM
Uh...is rejection out already because I am already liking it.
chector53 chector53 Mar 04, 2015 03:12AM
fell thru the cracks. kids slip thru without notice all the time,  This is why we pray,
cvazquez45 cvazquez45 Feb 26, 2015 06:11PM
Wow I had skipped it but I'm going back to download it. It sounds great.  See you.