Do you REALLY understand how it feels to have your heart truly broken?
@SoulSearcher its okay! I understand! I'm not much of a writer. I'm still starting.
@imnotaliveimdreaming sorry about that then if I hurt your feelings in any way, there are still a couple of small mistakes, but better :)
@SoulSearcher it is, but I completely understand. I tried my best to fix the grammar for now, but I will go back later.
@imnotaliveimdreaming you're definitely welcome, I was worried that you may have thought my comment a little harsh but I just have a pet peeve when it comes to grammar.
@SoulSearcher thank you for your honest opinion! i admit, I did write this rather quick. I think my whole point was that at the time I was writing this, I was psychopathy pacing myself. But I will defiantly fix the grammar! and again thank you