The Scars of a Wolf

The Scars of a Wolf

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Artist1923 By Artist1923 Completed

The wolf attacked me and I feel as though now bearing these scars I am alive but a part of me is dead. No one could love me, no one will love this tampered body but one. He is the one I truly love and he loves me until he tells me his secret. The one that will tear us a part and the one that will put me in danger. Is it love now? Or was it all just a lie?

  • attack
  • love
  • mystery
  • secrets
  • suspense
AbigailTheAmazing AbigailTheAmazing Mar 12, 2012
HI!
                              
                              Interesting plot I must say. Very original.
                              
                              I think you need to flesh out your paragraphs a little, and add more details.
                              
                              A few grammatical errors, but other than that, I found it to be very interesting.
Artist1923 Artist1923 Mar 12, 2012
@SanishaShaShaWynter yeah I was like that to I am mostly into the vampires and a few others but one day I'm like hell write a werewolf story
SanishaShaShaWynter SanishaShaShaWynter Mar 12, 2012
I am usually not into fantasy stories such as werewolves but this story has literally removed my ignorance. Nice start, so original!
Larenf Larenf Mar 12, 2012
I'm not going to lie... this is the first werewolf story l have ever read but I am very intrigued!  It's a wonderful start!  Just beware of those run on sentences.  Nice job!
Artist1923 Artist1923 Mar 12, 2012
@keytomyheartx3 thx and yeah its werewolf just not introduced yet but little hints here and there xD
keytomyheartx3 keytomyheartx3 Mar 12, 2012
I personally love werewolf stories, but this defiantly a differnt kind of werewolf story then i usually read! GREAT!! :D