You Make The Pain Fade Away

You Make The Pain Fade Away

107K Reads 2K Votes 35 Part Story
Gaby By infinitylovee17 Completed

Ashley Hart finds herself in a very difficult situation where she looses her parents. The New York girl is sent away to live in Georgia with her caring Grandparents. Completely devastated that her life has completely changed. Shattered because she lost her beloved parents, left her hometown, and left behind her friends without a goodbye. She meets irritating John Hudson. John who is determined to find out what is hurting her. Will he get to her? Will Ashley let him?

  • boy
  • carnival
  • city
  • country
  • cowboy
  • date
  • etc
  • falls
  • girl
  • love
  • romance
  • southern
japneetkaurdreamgirl japneetkaurdreamgirl Nov 09, 2016
It was just awesome. I really loved it what an imagination it is. Actually a writer should have a good look of imagination and vocabulary and u have both
lulud57 lulud57 May 07, 2013
Wow, first chapter was really caught my attention! It's so sad, and I feel so bad for Ashley:( You writing Is really good though, and It flows really smoothly. Adding this to my reading list(:
infinitylovee17 infinitylovee17 May 01, 2012
@SilverSharpie3 
                              
                              You are awesome!! :'D I was always confused with the commas & dialogue! I'll keep that mind for my next chpt. & thank you sooo muchh for actually analyzing it deeply :)
Lovely143 Lovely143 Apr 25, 2012
I can relate to Ashley with her transition and all (based on the summary) I moved from new York to Georgia too so I can really relate to how she felt! I love it and im surely gonna continue reading
Dheanndria Dheanndria Apr 14, 2012
I like how you showed her feelings about the situation, it says a lot about her character VOTED
infinitylovee17 infinitylovee17 Apr 13, 2012
@NadiaHambali Thank you very much! Getting at your story right now!