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4522 {The Number Series I}

4522 {The Number Series I}

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Sorrel Ann Nations By imaginationNationX Completed

The Number Series

(A Dystopian Society)  Highest ranking: #1 in Adventure 1/29/17; 2/14/17; 2/15/17
"Wonderful," I answered. "It's different."

"Different." He let the word play on his lips. It was a word I had read out of one of my books. He didn't fully understand what it meant, and neither did I, but you could feel the power behind it.
  Pronounced: Four-Five-Two-Two

-moonliqte -moonliqte Mar 12
I feel like shes gonna be the first to break some rule or find out about the real life and that
Man I think anyone in that society would be going mentally mad. At least if they were human ?
-moonliqte -moonliqte Mar 12
I never understood people who ate their food first. Its healthy if you drink a glass of water before a meal so if you get a lot of food, you'll get full quicker and your not overeating.
Huh, so even eating is robotic and orderly. I wonder if they've been trained to eat that way, or if they just copy each other over time
She can't know for certain that the girl feels like a failure, that's more of an assumption. Maybe: "I could tell the Officer made her feel like a failure . . ."
Hmm, this seems a bit sudden. It's a very powerful statement, but no emotional connection. Is she frightened? Is she so fed up she doesn't care that she's punished?