Rhythm (Poetry Book)

Rhythm (Poetry Book)

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LanceRedanican By LanceRedanican Updated May 21

Blood is red,
Sad is blue
My heart is broken
Thanks to you


My heart is bleeding
it has a crack,
and it really, really
wants you back.

  • anniversary
  • friends
  • friendship
  • gathering
  • honeymoon
  • island
  • love
  • reunion
  • wedding
  • yacht
Forgotten_Gurl Forgotten_Gurl Oct 22, 2014
I cried, because when I died. . you looked at the sky.. and said goodbye 
                              
dreamsandtears dreamsandtears Oct 16, 2013
Incredible, with a tone of sick and wicked humor. Beautifully executed.
LainaW LainaW Oct 13, 2013
I have nothing much to say except excellent. I wish I could write this smooth and entertaining.
AnnaSerene98 AnnaSerene98 Sep 28, 2013
Oh my God it is such a nice poem! You've got some real talent! Btw, voted.
etherealinsanity etherealinsanity Sep 21, 2013
I like that you can take such ordinary moments from life and turn them into this. Voted. :)
ashily101 ashily101 Aug 26, 2013
Wow. I loved the ending to this poem, it had a great punch and had a big impact. Beautifully written and very simple, yet still very entertaining. I loved the rhyming and the vocabulary used, well done :) a very interesting poem that holds so much meaning in only a few verses, nice work!