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Atlantis- under reconstruction

Atlantis- under reconstruction

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Lexi By ArmoredAvenger Updated Mar 20, 2011

Zoë has noticed she’s different from the other kids in her high school. Even after making it onto the school’s swim team she still finds it hard to get accepted. But at the weirdest time everything starts to come together and Zoë finally understands. The truth comes out and Zoë must make a decision that will change her life and either save or destroy others’ lives as well.

Wicketstar Wicketstar Oct 24, 2012
I love this! With only a few paragraphs I was drawn in with wonder. Keep writing! :)
ArmoredAvenger ArmoredAvenger Jun 13, 2011
@Bauhinia Thank you so much! i'll keep that in mind while i'm editing and fixing this!
Bauhinia Bauhinia Jun 13, 2011
This is really good! Just a tip: maybe don't introduce or mention so many characters at the start of the story, it makes it slightly confusing! But good job :)