C O L L I D E

C O L L I D E

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BusyDaniels By BusyDaniels Updated Mar 30, 2013

“You look beautiful.”
	I try to ignore the warmth that his words ignite in me; a warmth so familiar to me now; a warmth I'll never feel again. What good could it do either of us for me to smile at his compliment? What use is it for me to tell him how good he looks? Where's the point in reminding him that I still want him? We both know our feelings have no influence over what is to happen. What has to happen. 
	Tears sting my eyes, but I blink them back. There's a yearning in my stomach so intense I feel like my soul's dying. Maybe it is. The thought of anything happening to him is enough to strike me catatonic, and yet here I stand, poised to kill him.

GretelJohanaBartolo GretelJohanaBartolo Aug 24, 2012
Hey, do you think you are going to continue this? I mean, you have not written much but just by these to pages I can tell that you are a wonderful writer and if continued this story will be a great hit! 
                               thx for sharing your talent with us  :) xxx
MiniMoxx MiniMoxx Jul 28, 2012
I remember reading this before: this is still brilliant! I can't wait for more!
joanna-t-tran9 joanna-t-tran9 Jun 24, 2012
Oh my god! This is a wonderful hook!!
                              
                              I can't wait for this story!
naomirose1 naomirose1 May 27, 2012
Oh. My. Gosh. This is great! You pulled me in immedeatly! Great job! Please update soon!
McCray-by-Nature McCray-by-Nature Mar 08, 2012
This. Is. Amazing. It's gripping, and addictive. I caught this in my news stream and thought I'd check it out. You have to add more. The only thing I caught, was the typos when she mouths "I love you" at the end. There are some spacing issues. That's it. Amazing work so far. Just beautiful.