Jason has never had a mission quite like this. They had all been so easy. Find them, get them, and take them out. Never difficult, no running. They never even knew he was after them till the last moment. So why was this one so hard?
Awsome skills for a 14 year old !!! A damn amazing start , keep going:)
This is a really great start. It leaves us readers wanting more. I hope the rest of your story will be written this well, and have just as much description. :D
@AlliDavisI will finish! Eventually. My computer is being a hoe.
Naaawwww!!! My little bro can write!!! Awesome job Lackey! Update soon, can't wait to find out what your warped little brain comes up with next! *proud smile*
It's short, but other than that I really like it! You're story is very different and it's leaving me wondering what it'll be about...
Short but gripping..... Seems pretty interesting so far... Good one Lackey! :) @Joshua2038