Sorceress of the Deep (ON HOLD)

Sorceress of the Deep (ON HOLD)

17 Part Story 1.4K Reads 70 Votes
Abby By Snowdrop07 Updated Jul 28, 2012

~ Just fly away... ~
    
    Alumina is a Sorceress. Yeah, I said 'Sorceress'. On the Island Of Forsaken Secrets where she lives, it's no big deal. But there are far more than Sorcerers and Sorceresses living there, in fact, Alumina regularly brushes shoulders with Vampires, Werewolves, Ninjas, Zombies, and of course, the humans. But tension is in the air, and eventually the species can't stand being nice to each other anymore. War is declared.
    
    But not everyone wants a part in the war. But then again, neither does everyone have a choice. Behind the smiles of the Mayor and his Fleet, are softly whispered threats. Alumina, along with the other young Sorcerers and Sorceresses, is forced to play a part in the unfolding events, but ones she wishes she could leave forever. Unfortunately, in a island full to capacity with hidden secrets, thinly-veiled threats, and alliances which are close to breaking point, nothing is simple.
    
    And of course, there's the matter with the wand. But it's pointless, right?
    
    Eventually, Alumina realises that the solution is simple... or is it? Through the chaos of an island torn apart by war, comes an escape, and one that leads to far more than just freedom.

Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Jul 10, 2012 07:08PM
@1nOnly Thanks!!! :D It's always great to have feedback, and I'll probably change those points in the near future (once I have time). I'm glad you like this so far. :)
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Apr 08, 2012 03:31PM
@BlackSwan101 I'll probably edit it tomorrow, as I've got to get off now! Thanks for your feedback!
- - Apr 08, 2012 03:23PM
A great chapter. I liked this a lot. It is a unique idea. I agree the capital letters are a bit distracting. I would use bold or italics instead.
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Apr 08, 2012 03:19PM
@BlackSwan101 Thanks! :D Narissa isn't particularly nice at this part of the story. Oh, and @bronxnyc designed the cover. I know, I loved it at first sight, too! :D
- - Apr 08, 2012 03:16PM
Great start. I don't like Narcissa. And your cover is GORGEOUS!
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Apr 07, 2012 07:34PM
@purple_star7 Do you think so? Hmm... I may change that later.