Betrayal

Betrayal

590 Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
SiriCat By SiriCat Completed

This poem is from the perspective of a guy. It speaks of the emotions he experienced when he found out that a girl lead him on to believe she loved him then broke his heart. However he rises above all of the hurt and pain and finally becomes something good in life.

  • broken
  • heart
  • hope
  • love
xxAngelicxDevilxx xxAngelicxDevilxx Jul 01, 2011
This poem is seriously amazing, I love how it allows basically everyone to relate to it.
Lynfalling Lynfalling May 17, 2011
beautiful. Once again the emotin with which you write has blown me away. I can relate to the man in this poem, and just reading it my heart breaks over and over again. Very well done!!!
SiriCat SiriCat Feb 09, 2011
@Freshface416 thank you :)
                              @whisperwind96 lol- glad you liked it! :) 
nineteen96 nineteen96 Feb 09, 2011
This poem is really AWESOME...hey can I copy this?, and enter it in a contest?...haha, just kidding, anyways LOVE IT!!!
DarkRoseIsDying DarkRoseIsDying Feb 08, 2011
... This poem reminds me of this guy I use to like.... I told him I would love him forever, and then, sadly, I fell in love with another. and I tore my friends heart it two.... I feel absolutely horrible....  This is a really good poem... 
ssammygirl ssammygirl Jan 31, 2011
Oh my wow!! this was great! u really pulled emotions out with this one! loved it!!
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