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Betrayal

Betrayal

585 Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
SiriCat By SiriCat Completed

This poem is from the perspective of a guy. It speaks of the emotions he experienced when he found out that a girl lead him on to believe she loved him then broke his heart. However he rises above all of the hurt and pain and finally becomes something good in life.

xxAngelicxDevilxx xxAngelicxDevilxx Jul 01, 2011
This poem is seriously amazing, I love how it allows basically everyone to relate to it.
Lynfalling Lynfalling May 17, 2011
beautiful. Once again the emotin with which you write has blown me away. I can relate to the man in this poem, and just reading it my heart breaks over and over again. Very well done!!!
SiriCat SiriCat Feb 09, 2011
@Freshface416 thank you :)
                              @whisperwind96 lol- glad you liked it! :) 
nineteen96 nineteen96 Feb 09, 2011
This poem is really AWESOME...hey can I copy this?, and enter it in a contest?...haha, just kidding, anyways LOVE IT!!!
DarkRoseIsDying DarkRoseIsDying Feb 08, 2011
... This poem reminds me of this guy I use to like.... I told him I would love him forever, and then, sadly, I fell in love with another. and I tore my friends heart it two.... I feel absolutely horrible....  This is a really good poem... 
ssammygirl ssammygirl Jan 31, 2011
Oh my wow!! this was great! u really pulled emotions out with this one! loved it!!
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