Bloody Kiss

Bloody Kiss

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raven_333 By raven_333 Updated Feb 19, 2013

Holly is used to jumping from place to place with her mom, but she just wants to finally find the place they will permanently call home. She hopes moving in with her new step dad, and his son, will finally be the right place. Everything is starting to go ok until weird things start happening and strange messages keep appearing. Holly is becoming scared of her new home and might change her mind about wanting to stay. Who is leaving her these notes? and why are they after her?

xxTwinDorkZxx xxTwinDorkZxx Apr 24, 2012
1. I'm jealous of her room
                              2. Everything just got awkward!! :O
                              3. Very well written. I like the details. But I wish I knew more about Holly, like more of how she feels about everything.
raven_333 raven_333 Apr 24, 2012
@Londonandeye Thank you for catching that! I have truble with keeping with the shes and hes. I always want to put I. But thank you :)
Londonandeye Londonandeye Apr 24, 2012
My only comment is do you mean to have the first word be "I'm" when everything else is she? But this was very good, it had my attention right from the start.