Knowing Her Changed Everything [ON HOLD]

Knowing Her Changed Everything [ON HOLD]

1.5K Reads 101 Votes 8 Part Story
S.J. Rhodes By Friday13thx3 Updated Apr 02, 2012

Andrew was a prep who noticed a quiet and shy girl named Val in his freshman year, but was advised to let his curiosity drop. Entering his sophomore year he can't seem to get Val out of his head, and wondered if he made a mistake to try to forget about her. As he gets closer to her, he over hears a conversation that wasn't meant to be heard. Apparently Val has a secret, that she would do anything to keep  secret. Andrew stricken with curiosity tries to figure the secret out, and once he figures it out he can never go back.

pink896heart pink896heart Apr 02, 2012
dang...interesting chapter. i really liked that it was mostly a flashback. that explained a lot about the last few sentences. upload soon plz, plz, plz!
Friday13thx3 Friday13thx3 Apr 02, 2012
@QueenofFantasy Yea, it was a flashback just to make the readers understand their first encounter.
CMQuinn CMQuinn Apr 02, 2012
Since Im australian the terms mean nothing to me. Reading through it I would have liked to slow down, describe and fill with a bit more emotion. I felt like it was moving too fast, though I am beginning to think it was intended?
                              
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Wonderstruck_dreamer Wonderstruck_dreamer Apr 02, 2012
This is really good. I like how as soon as Andrew sees Val, he's kind of interested in her. Your writing is simple and flows nicely... I'll continue reading!!
StoryDreamer101 StoryDreamer101 Apr 01, 2012
Wow! This first chapter left me speechless! Your writing style is refreshing and flows very well. I love how subtly hinted at the characters traits! I'll vote!
NeonRoses4 NeonRoses4 Mar 20, 2012
I think it's interesting, I'd like to read more :). Is Andrew bi?