The Darkness

The Darkness

72 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Brayan Gonzalez By rogue_writer Completed

one day when I was down, I grabbed a pen and paper and just wrote what I felt, and this is what I came up with.

  • darkness
  • sad
prudenxe prudenxe Jun 12, 2013
I really like this! I feel like it just captures everything beautifully, and I love the descriptive words you used :)
RunawayTrain RunawayTrain Apr 14, 2012
Very descriptive, powerful, And overall, you are a great writer :)
AJMorgan AJMorgan Apr 13, 2012
I like the imagery of it. It was fun to imagine. :P very captivating in a way.
                              
                              I would make it longer and more mature but that's just me.
                              
                              All together, I enjoyed it.
                              
                              :)
xSabrina xSabrina Apr 12, 2012
@rogue_writer i checked out your new poem and left a comment :D will you look at some of my poems? xD
rogue_writer rogue_writer Apr 12, 2012
@xSabrina BTW - just posted a new poem. And be sure to check out my other ones, specially my book titled Remember Me. thank you again. =D
rogue_writer rogue_writer Apr 12, 2012
@xSabrina thank you so much!! =) you don't know how much that means =D