The Girl in the Mirror

The Girl in the Mirror

611 Reads 26 Votes 10 Part Story
Berlin Dixon By BerlinDixon Updated Jul 09, 2012

Heather Jones remembers nothing of her old life. The life where she and her two sisters and mother lived happily away from her father. After the accident that took her family's lives, she was stuck having amnesia/ The memories come and go, of course, but nothing much. So she moved in with her abusive father in the Bahamas, miserable, until a letter from a mysterious boarding school arrived from England saying she got a scholarship to go. And she did. Big mistake.

thewaytobe100 thewaytobe100 Jul 15, 2012
(amber). I am finished reading the  1st chapter. I love the way you describe things, like when the person is walking across the bridge and the smoky fog...
                              Anyway, I put this on my reading list so I can finish it.
pacesettergurl18 pacesettergurl18 Jul 15, 2012
Wow, this was brilliant! Your use of words really made this flow, plus your writing is very good! Keep up the good work!
ButterflyDoll ButterflyDoll Jul 15, 2012
great start! You really pulled the reader in with your words!