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Who Will Save Me Now?

Who Will Save Me Now?

6.6K Reads 120 Votes 12 Part Story
hillvolleygirl By hillvolleygirl Updated Jun 22, 2014

When Silver was a little girl, she had a dream that her mother was going to die. Minutes later there was a knock on the door. That's when everything changed. Faced with a new reality, she has come to accept that what she was thought she knew and what is true are worlds apart. Now, to find her own truth, she must sort through her memories. To save those she loves, she must believe in her dreams, but when it comes to herself, who will save her now?

Londonandeye Londonandeye Oct 27, 2012
Wow it really has been a year since you were on here lol your descriptions are really good!
hillvolleygirl hillvolleygirl Oct 27, 2012
@sgurlrox67 Thanks so much! I just started updating again :)
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 09, 2011
Your story has a great start. You don't overbuden the reader with details. Instead, you give just enough to draw them in and keep reading. I voted. 
SouthCasper72 SouthCasper72 Feb 09, 2011
great opener, it definitely has a hook and you're a very descriptive writer- you could go far with this story keep it up
Sararoseey Sararoseey Feb 05, 2011
This was SO good! I was honestly hooked from the first sentence. AmaZing and impeccable descriptions, you've beyond earned my vote and I wish I could vote twice :)
emmikat emmikat Feb 02, 2011
Wow! Great attention grabber! Hope the plot is just as good.