Unexpected Letters

Unexpected Letters

2.5K Reads 72 Votes 5 Part Story
Jessica By Jezibelle04 Updated Feb 02, 2011

Lieutenant Gabriel Wilson had always been on his own. Never even thought about having a family until the day he received a letter from a little girl. With so few words, that little girl changed something inside of him but he could tell she was scared of something. Gabe sets out on a mission to find out what troubles follow this one little girl and her mother but will he be ready for the explanation from the little girl's mother? Why would an eight year old girl have to be on the run and what is she on the run from?

TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Feb 17, 2011
I absolutely loved the premise of this. I reckon you could perhaps add in some description and put in a little more at the start, but that i suspect is a matter of personal style rather than any sort of necessity. A really lovely idea. Gav
Melsworld Melsworld Jan 31, 2011
Awww this is too sweet and this is a great way to relieve ur stress and I can't wait to see the magic that u make happen unfold between Gabe and Jennifer even little Molly
maskedducky maskedducky Jan 30, 2011
So I think you have nice relief from your Secrets Revealed series. I like how this one is going so far, I'm interested to see how Gabe and Jennifer get along. 
Jezibelle04 Jezibelle04 Jan 30, 2011
@JustLetGo I plan to upload more after I cook dinner! Not sure how you guys will respond to it but it is just something that I've been working on to give myself a little break from Secrets Revealed.
EverWonders EverWonders Jan 30, 2011
oh my god, this is a total mystery i want to know about. upload more soon. 
Jezibelle04 Jezibelle04 Jan 30, 2011
@Pink_Tink I'm doing this completely different from the usual stuff I write. It will have some romance in it but it's more along the lines of fantasy. I promise I will upload more in the next couple of hours.