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Wedding Anniversary

Wedding Anniversary

715 Reads 126 Votes 6 Part Story
Parth Toroneel By Toroneel Completed

Suhas and Shalini both are happily married couple. On their 3rd anniversary Shalini found that Suhas is having an affair with his secretary. On their anniversary, Will suhas confess his another love? Or His secretary can be reason to break up their love forever? Or it was just an obscure prejudice she had assume? 
  
Full of romance and suspense story...
  
Happy reading to all readers...

Do you really need that ' while '? Sentence bus perfect without while too.
Wow. It's a good idea by the way, sweetheart. But as of now, I'm quite busy with my new office project.
Can you change into 'with a warm smile' ? 
                              
                              
                              It makes more perfect (as I think.)
With a smile on her lips, she asked Suhas whether  were there any special day in July (I don't remember the month u told)
Here expected is not the proper word. And Had expected is totally wrong as it tells that the thing has already taken place and she expected it a long ago.
Shacked in means move in or live with someone as lover. I think it's not the correct word. 
                              
                              Shake- shook
                              Wake - woke