My Cousin's Bestfriend

My Cousin's Bestfriend

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Danesha By Jstdealwithit Updated Aug 09, 2012

Yazmina didn't expect what was gonna happen in her life at this point and time. She was just a normal teen doing normal teen stuff but except the dating and having a boyfriend. But then she finds out something that would either change her life in a good way or bad way.

bettyboo125bo bettyboo125bo Jan 31, 2011
this is really good...the only downfall is that you have a LOT of run on sentences so try adding more punctuations....oh and also capitalizations as well but other than that...I like it