Half Alive

Half Alive

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Bethany By MelDevine Updated Oct 05, 2012

Love at first sight could possibly be the best way to meet your future 'one' But what if he is the last person you'd wanna be with? What if he isn't what you consider real? Even if it is love at first sight, Gabriella just wants to forget all about the boy who played her as a fool.

fenear fenear Apr 06, 2012
Its rly good thnx for telling me about ur book its AWESOME!!
MelDevine MelDevine Apr 05, 2012
@CassidayMoriarity thank you so much for your opinion! :) I really appreciate it! I'll be sure to work on it! :)
- - Apr 04, 2012
I really like it! :) I could imagine the scene perfectly!! <3 KEEP WRITING!!! <3
YourLilMonster YourLilMonster Mar 29, 2012
Wow. This is amazing! I love how you elaborate on details. I can really feel what the character is feeling. Keep going
LikeThatGirl- LikeThatGirl- Mar 19, 2012
Amazing! 
                              You write so well , keep working. ;)
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