Love Lost & Found

Love Lost & Found

5.9K Reads 129 Votes 11 Part Story
Jessica By jessieboox001 Updated Aug 07, 2012

As young children, Ivy and Sam were the very best of friends; they went everywhere together and did everything together. But a secret that Sam has drives them apart. When Sam starts coming back into Ivy's life, he discovers how much he really cares about her. Will he ever get the courage to tell her his secret so they can be together? Or will he keep it from her and just keep shutting her out?

  • bestfriends
  • found
  • friends
  • hate
  • lost
  • love
TheOneException TheOneException Aug 07, 2012
wow this is a very cute but sad story. you could work on a few things but the first chapter really turned out greaet
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jessieboox001 jessieboox001 Jul 13, 2012
@ColleenHawke Thank you!
                              
                              @Eclipse119 Thank you sooooo much! I am so happy you enjoyed it! :')<3
Eclipse119 Eclipse119 Jul 13, 2012
Aw, this is cute/sad!!:( I love the name ivy and she seems rockin!! Sam seems hot and mysterious!! And why does he hate her so much?? Hm... Mysterious and slightly romantic: just my style!:D love your writing style, too, I noticed hardly any mistakes. Very nice:3
ColleenHawke ColleenHawke Jul 10, 2012
Your descriptions and characterizations are great!  The only mistake I found was a typo in the second paragraph where 'hid' should be 'hide'.
Springgirl101 Springgirl101 Jul 10, 2012
I loved this! It's so interesting and the dialogue is great :]
fruitus fruitus Jul 03, 2012
Straight away, it sounded much better! Good job and keep it up