Once (short story)

Once (short story)

198 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
SabrinaLouise By SabrinaLouise Completed

It always gets worse before it gets better.

  • alone
  • cold
  • crying
  • friendship
  • girl
  • heartbreak
  • loss
  • love
  • tears
georgiahobo georgiahobo Apr 21, 2012
Really great. You managed to plot her whole life onto one single chapter! It’s something that a lot of people can’t do. :)
AfireWithNoFlame AfireWithNoFlame Apr 17, 2012
Really nice :) love the plot line! maybe you could try adding on? im sure theres more you could add to it :3
MomotaroChan MomotaroChan Apr 13, 2012
It's really good. I really like ur writing style. >.< good job!
iSammiex iSammiex Apr 11, 2012
I'm surprised that this story doesn't have more comments or votes. It really got me from the start - it's so beautifully written and full of emotion. I don't remember seeing any mistakes either. I'm going to add it to my library. Well done. :)xxo
Mi4l0v3sy0u Mi4l0v3sy0u Mar 29, 2012
OH MY GOD, This story has been wonderful and it's filled with emotion, nice work @SabrinaLouise REALLY GREAT JOB