Tomorrow's Chances

Tomorrow's Chances

322 Reads 26 Votes 3 Part Story
Jane By janerocs Updated May 20, 2013

Everyone will die. Its the nature of life but Sophia did not expect to see herself in a coffin. She struggled to find a way to say goodbye to her family and friends. That's when she asked Myco for help and in return, she needed to fulfill his wish but she did not know that even if she stayed always by his side it would take almost every Tomorrow's Chances to say 'I love you' to him.

  • bunnycupcake
  • death
  • fantasy
  • ghost
  • love
  • tomorrow-chances
  • wickedrocket
toti_fruti_90 toti_fruti_90 Apr 07, 2012
this was really good, totally loved it and adding it to my reading list :D
veracity veracity Apr 07, 2012
This is amazing. I love the description and it's very emotional. I would actually read more of this! Well done, keep writing :)
GuruPushkin GuruPushkin Apr 07, 2012
Wow. I am in love with this. This got me completely hooked. Update soon.
MeetLoveBetray MeetLoveBetray Apr 07, 2012
Wow, compelling!
                              
                              I only saw a few mistakes which is fantastic!!
                              
                              you have a lot of talent! Keep it up!!
pickllles pickllles Mar 21, 2012
As everyone else said, there were a few grammatical mistakes, but I'm sure if you went back and re-read it, you'd catch them :) 
                              But the story was amazing. It was well wrote and it was surprising. I was not expecting her to be at her own funeral. You're a lovely writer. 
                              Voted. :)
youmesaturdaynight youmesaturdaynight Mar 21, 2012
That was really good xD I loved it. I think you should keep writing! Good job.