As I Burn

As I Burn

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Danni_Mistwood By Danni_Mistwood Updated Apr 11, 2011

Alys Eastwood has lost everything in the ongoing war between Demons and those who dare to hunt them. Alys is one of those hunters, abandoned by her mother, trained by her father and betrayed by the love of her life. She is fighting to find meaning in an increasingly meaningless world. Will she manage? Will she discover exactly why the beautiful Jason Bridge turned his back on her? And will she realise that the world in which she lives is about to implode, before its too late?

Danni_Mistwood Danni_Mistwood Apr 01, 2011
@ehesse Thanks so much for the compliment. Alys is what i imagine I would be like if I'd lived her life (you'll learn more about it later haha) She's my hero too :D
                              Thanks again, 
                              Danni x
ehesse ehesse Feb 05, 2011
Good hook! You definitely drew me in right away. And so did Alys' badassness! She's my hero already haha. I'm going to save this. The mystery and darkness is really interesting. Nice work!
Danni_Mistwood Danni_Mistwood Feb 02, 2011
@PhillipRiley13 Haha, may well do when i get round to it. Busy atm with Sam and SHannon's bday stories and writing the next bit to this plus beta'ing in all my spare time lolol... for you no less :D Anyway, ill let you know if I do :D xx
                              Danni xx
PhillipRiley13 PhillipRiley13 Feb 02, 2011
Absoloutley amazing! You have true talent, you most certainly have been sprinkled with the English dust. I do like this story a bit more than others you have shown me, however, if you were to make one about magic then I'd most definitely love it! Well done :) 
MommyMagic MommyMagic Jan 30, 2011
Wow!  This is really good.  You don't explain the creature, but I assume that is coming.  I can't wait to see what you'll do next.