The Unruly King

The Unruly King

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Asher Tensei By AsherTensei Completed

A king learns a hard lesson as he tries to find a suitable heir to his throne.

I wrote this story originally in school and I've thought about it often since. After it was lost, I decided to rewrite it as best I could. 

Please vote and comment if you like it! And check out my feature story, Mana, if you love young adult fantasy http://bit.ly/IAp9Nq

imnotabarbiegirl imnotabarbiegirl Feb 27, 2014
I love this. Its really good. I love the ending. Your really talented!
Aiowynn Aiowynn Dec 17, 2013
Love it. I wanted to read this shorter story before I indulged in Mana, glad I did. Wonderful work and I enjoyed reading it!