True love never dies!

True love never dies!

1.5K Reads 71 Votes 9 Part Story
Eleni10 By Eleni10 Updated May 02, 2012

Preparing for GCSE's and moving to America is the hardest thing to do when you fancy a boy for like ... Ages!! Ryan; A typical boy with great looks is torn between two girls. But these girls are not just girls ... Their cousins!! 
Who will Ryan pick out of the two cousins? Has Ryan been loving the wrong girl just to get the other girls attention? Or was Ryan just too shy to confess his love to the right girl? Will Ryan be able to save the girl of his dreams before she moves to America?

Eleni10 Eleni10 May 05, 2012
@BeeHappySisi123 
                              
                              Thank-you! Okie dokies! Thanks for the advice. Will do! :D
BeeHappySisi123 BeeHappySisi123 May 01, 2012
I like the story. Its really cute and cleaver, my only adive would b not to make it clique because with this plot line it could go there really fast. So remember to keep it fresh and origanal :)
Eleni10 Eleni10 Apr 12, 2012
@angela98 Okie dokies! I shall have a check! :D 
                              Thank-you for reading! :D
angela98 angela98 Apr 11, 2012
This is pretty good! Awesome actually........ A few grammatical mistakes spotted, nothing u can't fix =D
Eleni10 Eleni10 Apr 11, 2012
@xxmajaine Okie dokies. I will take that on board. Thanks! Um, I never really had in mind that this was a prologue. Ahaha. Thank-you!! :D
Eleni10 Eleni10 Apr 08, 2012
@xxGucciGuccix Umm... Okie dokies!!! That shall be fixed! :) Oh, and thanks for reading it! :)