Garrow

Garrow

2 Part Story 212 Reads 6 Votes
Cameron Jace By CJ_is_God Updated Mar 26, 2012

"He'd been forced to watch, hidden in the stone gutter under the temple, as the soldiers had turned everything he'd known into ash."
    
    Twelve year old Garrow was forced to watch as soldiers of the Empire burned his village to the ground. He and the sole other survivor Arthur, fled for their lives. It was then that Garrow vowed to destroy the Empire and all that it stands for. Now at seventeen his is ready to enact his revenge.

LusciousGirls LusciousGirls Apr 29, 2012 01:50AM
You have a great style of writing and a way with words. This is very interestin! I'll be sure to stick around.
CJ_is_God CJ_is_God Mar 26, 2012 12:02AM
lols thanks. I fixed it, he now takes his boots off and then goes to the rock
jellyfish0118 jellyfish0118 Mar 18, 2012 01:19AM
I really like it :D And I don't know if you did it on purpose, but the second page ended at the perfect spot to make me wanna keep reading.
CJ_is_God CJ_is_God Mar 12, 2012 01:46AM
Because... I don't know... that's just what Arthur decided to call him. He was only 10 at the time. 10 year olds don't make a lot of sense
CJ_is_God CJ_is_God Mar 11, 2012 11:03PM
Garrow is pronounced like "arrow" but with a G sound in front like in "grrrr".... So his nickname could be "Aro" which is the basis for Arthur calling him "Ari"
Tank_Girl Tank_Girl Mar 11, 2012 09:33PM
i still love it :) im a little confused as to why arthur calls him Ari though, so mayb work tht in there or something? urrm some grammar junk too but im sure u noticed that ^-^ im excited to read more :D