Locker 1216 // ON HOLD

Locker 1216 // ON HOLD

7 Part Story 6.6K Reads 290 Votes
little miss grumpy By northless Updated Aug 06, 2013

“Every cloud has a thick sparkling silver lining.”

Meet Cordelia Cassidy, Frenchdale High’s most popular girl in school. But not like every cliché, she’s not a bitch. In fact, she's far from it.

People say that Cordelia Cassidy is the kindest and most honest person you’ll ever meet. She wouldn’t do as much as hurt a fly if she had the chance.

When sophomore year begins, Cordelia is after one thing; staying popular and at the top of the social food chain. But what happens when she’s planted with the schools most unlucky locker? Does she go against her beliefs of bad luck? Or does every cloud really have a thick sparkling silver lining?

Follow Cordelia as she pulls through her story of fate, luck and God.

m4Sean m4Sean May 27, 2013 02:18PM
@par4dise Well since you say that. Next time I'll give better feedback better I don't like being all lovey dovey LOL
northless northless May 27, 2013 02:17PM
@taimeimpala 
                              
                              I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :-) Thanks for your feedback.
                              
                              @blacklovespurple 
                              
                              I have to agree, it probably was a bit confusing aha. Thanks for your feedback! :-)
northless northless May 27, 2013 02:15PM
@m4Sean 
                              
                              
                              I dislike fan fiction too :P
                              
                              I'm really glad you liked it, haha. :') And, I'm always welcome to criticism, it's how I improve my writing. xD
m4Sean m4Sean May 27, 2013 02:13PM
Not fan fiction I mean Teen fiction sorry haha 
                              
                              I dislike teen and fan fiction
This was well written and very professional. I liked how you took time into describing things. It made it sound very realistic. I didn't come across any mistakes! I enjoyed this chapter a lot!
subversion subversion Jul 08, 2012 12:10PM
A great way to bring in a character, as well as having the main character a not so known name. The plot is very original.