The Adventures of the Human Robot

The Adventures of the Human Robot

432 Reads 10 Votes 3 Part Story
JustChillin By JustChillin Updated Feb 05, 2011

HR a.k.a. the Human Robot is sent to study humans by Dr.Control. It records their life as it tries to understand them and how it connects with its. He learns about real love, fake love, haterd, desperation, pure madness & more. Leave comments, I cherish your opnions!

Phoenixn Phoenixn Jun 23, 2011
I like it :) it's different but kind of confusing. And the picture is cute too!
Phoenixn Phoenixn Jun 23, 2011
I like it :) it's different but kind of confusing. And the picture is cute too!
hopefullydazed hopefullydazed Feb 02, 2011
Please read Ruff Waters!! And Vote Please You'd do me such a favor!! Please???
                              
                              I like it Very nice Chapter :) Upload soon :)
lilpyromama lilpyromama Jan 31, 2011
I like how you have the pov but i do also agree with chanson on the switching around. I also think you could have had more of a grab in the begining. Like a better draw in.
chanson chanson Jan 31, 2011
I really like the start and it got me hook. But I think it was switching around the pov too much. It would be better to keep it simple :) 
                              But you still get a vote because I liked the uniqueness of it!